sparrow wings
the diminishing whirr
of her last words
John Hawkhead
summer solstice
the mail truck’s door
slides open
Brad Bennett
my blood turns cold soba noodles
Gregory Piko
winter drizzle
the shining jowls
of the stonemason
Michael Buckingham Gray
and one of my own from this edition …
the long note
of a wire fence –
Middlemarch
Sandra Simpson
Middlemarch is a small South Island town in central Otago, New Zealand. As you can probably guess from the haiku it’s surrounded by open country, a lot of it farmland. Middlemarch was named in 1876 and George Eliot’s novel of the same name may have been the inspiration. The Middlemarch Singles Ball was held biennially between 2001 and 2021, trying to find partners for local farmers and bringing out city singles from Dunedin on a special train!
Here are a couple of poems in Presence that allude to well-known works. I enjoy the occasional haiku like this when it’s done with a light hand, as here. From Wikipedia: Honkadori (本歌取り) is an allusion within a poem to an older poem which would be generally recognised by its potential readers – even including some of the original words. Honkadori has qualities of yūgen and ushin (有心, possessing heart). I have seen yūgen defined as: An awareness of the universe that triggers emotional responses too deep and powerful for words. They’re hard terms to define in English!
back of the fridge
the plums that were
so sweet and so cold
Allison Douglas-Tourner
The haiku above refers to the 1938 poem by William Carlos Williams, ‘This is Just to Say’, while the one below alludes to ‘Moondance’ written and recorded in 1970 by Van Morrison.
a marvelous night
for a moon dance
birch catkins
Jeff Hoagland
The following haiku may simply be a description of visiting the grave of Sylvia Plath (1932-1963) in west Yorkshire, but there’s the stabbing ‘each grass blade’ to contend with, for it was a blade of grass in an envelope that triggered her husband’s infidelity, that led to their divorce and her subsequent death. Read more here. (It could be I’m overthinking it!)
plath’s grave
each grass blade
catching light
Duncan Richardson
Other haiku from Presence, including one of my own.
first night in his crib
sleeping soundly
the executor of my will
Joshua St Claire
dogwood buds
how my father loved
a good comeback
Michele Root-Bernstein
grey drizzle
an apple in her pocket
for the horses
Carolyn Skanne
old mooring posts
at dusk the terns arrive
two by two
Sandra Simpson